Hello Author, 

Let me first congratulate you on a job well done. You have completed your manuscript and are ready to take things to the next level. This is where I come in. With a fresh set of eyes, I will peruse your manuscript for the following: 

1. Character Development 

2. Plot Consistency 

3. Dialogue 

4. Structure 

5. Theme 

6. Pacing 

7. Anything that you request 

I will also seek to answer the following questions: 

  • What did I like about the main character?
  • Is there anything that I didn’t like about the character?
  • Were there any points where I got confused? 
  • What character did I love and why?
  • What character did I hate and why?
  • What are the things that made me laugh or sad?
  • What made me cry or feel emotional?
  • At what points did I get bored?
  • What did I expect would happen at the end? Was I happy or unhappy with the resolution?

My feedback will be delivered to you in the form of a letter. I welcome all genres, and I am happy to create custom quotes. Please send me a message so we can discuss your project to see if it is a good fit. I look forward to working with you.

-Purity333 (former JCDC Best Adult Short Story Author)